IMPERFECTx_45's Xanga

Friday, March 23, 2007

Fri, 23 Mar 2007 00:15:12 GMT

Guess who is sick of Xanga?

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Monday, February 19, 2007

Mon, 19 Feb 2007 17:35:55 GMT

she bathes in a sea of l i e s
as her soul so slowly sighs.

like a cement sponge
resisting the urge
to soak up
all the insecurities
laid out
for her
to take in

as the walls around her heart
are built up
the inside is melting,
disintegrating
until she is left

with nothing left to love.

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She is a question mark.
She can talk away a storm,
but can become speechless
in a single moment.

She is a question mark.
She has her ups and downs,
but most just see the lefts and rights,
while she hides in the shadows.

She is a question mark.
Predictable and not,
until you break her shell.

Then you see a bright eyed girl
who wonders,
dreams,
loves,
expresses,
and holds all she is
in her hand,
just a single inch,
from your grasp.

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That's all for now.

<3

Monday, February 19, 2007

Mon, 19 Feb 2007 15:20:32 GMT

Rain running down her face,
Mixing with her tears.
As she longs for his embrace,
She can’t help but hide her fear.

Seeing her with him,
Sets her heart on fire.
Though she knows it is a sin,
She can’t suppress desire.

Foolish choices swarm her head,
And she replays the days.
Leading up to when he fled,
Still left in a thick haze.

Alone with no more tears to spare,
The rain stealing all dispair.

Here's one of my favorites:
[it was written in the shape of a heart]

Boggles the mind,
and pierces the heart,
but bring you joy,
right from the start.
This is a feeling you can't live without,
but once you've felt it,
you're left with no doubt.
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Friday, February 09, 2007

Fri, 09 Feb 2007 20:48:29 GMT

Well. This Xanga is now dedicated to my poetry.
I've heard that it's good from quite a few.
So why not get some feedback on it?

So... each post with contain 1 or 2 of my poems.

There will be no regular schedule of my posting.
So beware for some randomness.
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Poems will be up later today.
Warning:
Constructive critisism is appreciated.
Hate, on the other hand, is not.
I don't want to hear if it sucks, just tell me what you like to see changed.
And praise, in small amounts is fine.
I don't like people going OMGSH YOUR POEMS ARE INCREDIBLE.
It's nice to hear, but please don't.

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